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As a special request from the Role Player, she wanted me to change Aleen up a bit. So I updated her helmet and hood to make it more ME3-ish. And yes, I made her personalized Revenant big.

I should of put some texture on the gun. Other then that, I'm pleased.

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Critique by ~Binson Jul 4, 2012, 4:24:39 PM

Awesome work, man.
I knew you you had that ARTISTIC JKFDGHPGN'DGDIDGFN.

Her pose is very well done, maybe straighten her left arm abit.

As usual you color like a BOSS.

Lighting maybe off, seems it's all around her.

I suggest a leathery texture for the gun, makes it look more realistic.

Awesome work, man.
I knew you you had that ARTISTIC JKFDGHPGN'DGDIDGFN.

Her pose is very well done, maybe straighten her left arm abit.

As usual you color like a BOSS.

Lighting maybe off, seems it's all around her.

I suggest a leathery texture for the gun, makes it look more realistic.

What do you think?

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Critique by ~Borkless Jul 4, 2012, 10:51:44 AM

I think the changes worked quite well, the extra seam lines and carbon-fiber detailing on her suit really make her look more combat-ready.

Her new suit also looks a lot sturdier and less in-your-face sensuous. More formed carbon-fiber than painted-on latex. Not that this change makes her any less hot. I think the more practical suit actually improves her looks more than the skimpier V1

I like the added packs and equipment, She still looks a little bare, maybe a gun-belt with pouches for thermal clips, but that's more a personal taste issue.

But, her suit is too shiny! If she's going to wade into battle, her suit's gonna get beat up. Throw some grime on there, I'm betting it will look better.

As others said, the Revenent does look a mite large, but it IS a GPMG, so it should be one big gun. The gun also seems to lack detail and, like her suit, seems a little too shiny for a combat-ready workhorse.

Finally, you might wanna rethink the pose of her right hand. I applaud you for not having her put her finger on the trigger, but they way you have it looks a little awkward.